Breakfast in Bimini- Chapter 12 segment
Below is and unedited excerpt from the current book I’m working on, which should be complete by the end of summer. It’s sometimes difficult to read parts of novels and really understand the story and for the writer it’s hard to post unedited drafts. But I’m going for it! I try to pick neutral paragraphs without much background needed or plot revealed. Next time I’ll have another travel story. I hope you enjoy and as always I welcome feedback and thoughts.
Breakfast in Bimini.
Smoke filled my lungs in the middle of the night and for a fleeting moment I thought I was dreaming. I shook Luke simultaneously pushing out the screen and yelling, “Fire.” In an instant impromptu swoosh I bolted through the screened-in window, seamlessly landing on the wooden dock. I unplugged the boat power cord from the electrical box and upon returning to the cabin, I opened all the doors and windows while…
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